So hush now,
The world's still turning
You'll see
It won't be too hard
When the sun comes up
Bright when it's shining
So why all the fuss
Your brows come greeting
Each other in the shadows
Smile now
Come on and smile
You'll see it ain't too bad
I'll be here
You won't be needing
To hide beneath your
Greeting brows
Hush now
Come on and hush
Sweet Little Dark Side
Harsh Tender Rough Edges
Soft Little Loud Sound
Hiding Neath Red Swollen Eyes
Rested Tired Round Head
Quiet Shouting Whisper
Inside My Outside Heart
So hush now, hush
Just hush now, hush
No use speaking
No use speaking
No use speaking
So hush now, hush
We'll forget about it later
We'll talk about it later
But now hush
Hush now, hush
Well-crafted :D
ReplyDeleteNever knew you had a knack for poetry!
Btw, is your blog solely for poetry? If so, ayos, padayona. Gamay pa lang man gud akong nahibal-ang poetry blogs na Pinoy-made. Yours would be a good one at that I believe :D
Again, kudos!
tiago
By the way, I'm adding your blog sa among recommended reads ha, hehe, if you don't mind.
ReplyDeleteas in? thanks :) dli ni pure poetry kuya kay kapoy puro poems... hehe.
ReplyDeletekuya, di gud ko kabalo unsaon pag-follow. unsaon man na? hehe. thanks! :)
Gitanggal nako among "follow" na feature samo blog kay medyo puno na ang sidebar, hehe. But you can try enabling your blog roll simung sidebar and link our blog up there. And then i-set nimu sya na madisplay ang latest entries sa blogs na imung gi-add. Then also, you try putting up a shoutbox na lang pud para sadya--masdali i-interact with the readers that way :o
ReplyDeleteBtw, astig imong first entry "Hush Now, Hush" kay ironic sa imong blog name na "Loud Enough", hahaha. Gituyo nimo? Either way, I really like it. Ganahan jud ko makakita ug creativity even in subtlety :D
Unsa imo plan ani imong blog, are you going to transform it into a money-machine someday too, or padayon ra na journal nimu?
ah mao diay... hai naku. hehe. unsaon man nang blog roll chuva? as in banga kaayo kog tecnhical stuff man gud kuya... hahaha :D
ReplyDeleteactually, wala to nako gituyo.. haha!:D pero now that you pointed it out, ironic bitaw kaayo xa. :D Grabe noh? na-notice nimo. hehehehe :D
i dont know kuya. I don't know how to make money out of blogs....